To Forgive

This is just a small text I had to write for school. C&C greatly
appreciated...



- To Forgive -


The twilight slowly pulls the night, and I know that this will be the last
time I’ll ever see daylight.
War devastated the whole country but its effects hadn’t been noticed here
yet. Most of the people didn’t even worry about it. They used to say that
war was their friend because it never hurt them. I was one of those people
until today.
I had gone to the market, which was located in the suburbs of the little
city where I had my insignificant existence. After a few minutes strolling
in the middle of an unusually silent crowd, I decided to return home. While
I walked, I remembered the warning I had heard on the radio that morning,
about the possibility of urban guerrilla’s attacks.
I was about to cross the street when, suddenly, four masked man grabbed me
and dragged me across the sidewalk to an alley. Two of them immobilised me
while the others either punched or kicked me.
“Look, he’s one of those fundamentalists!” – one of them shouted. – “Lets
make him suffer before killing him.”
“No, you are wrong...” – I mumbled – “You’re confusing me with someone
else!”
“We don’t care!” – they replied.
They kept beating me until they were too tired to continue doing so. Then,
they carried me to a van and drove for about 10 minutes. The door was opened
and two pairs of strong arms pulled me from the van and nearly squashed me
against the rocky floor. I could only hear the van accelerating and
disappearing in the distance.
I can’t move... I don’t even have enough strengths to squall. The only
thing my battered body claims is eternal rest. Soon, I’ll be dead and just
because I have different ideas from the other people.
I no longer feel my limbs; my thoughts are very hazy. It isn’t fair that I
die like this... As I run into God’s arms, I forgive them and pass away.

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________________________P r a s e o d y m i u m  5 9
praseodymium59#geocities.com         ICQ UIN 4191789
http://www.geocities.com/SoHo/5992/Praseodymium.html
'Fight, turn, love, with no pity' - Blind Zero______

Praseodymium 59 wrote:
> 
> This is just a small text I had to write for school. C&C greatly
> appreciated...
> 
> - To Forgive -
> 
> The twilight slowly pulls the night, and I know that this will be the last

[snip]
> die like this... As I run into God’s arms, I forgive them and pass away.
> 
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> ________________________P r a s e o d y m i u m  5 9
> praseodymium59#geocities.com         ICQ UIN 4191789
> http://www.geocities.com/SoHo/5992/Praseodymium.html
> 'Fight, turn, love, with no pity' - Blind Zero______

Hey that was lovely,i like stories where the hero dies.The thing
about it is that it isnt ascii art AND it contained non ascii 
characters.I could forgive it not having a picture in it,if 
it was a little more gory but it wasnt AND it had NON ASCII
stuff sprinkled all over it.Praseodymium 59,ya ought to
consider removing the characters b4 ya post and maybe adding
a pic or 2 there.
     __
    /  \  There he goes!!!GET HIM!!
   / O o  /
   \   \ /
    \_"/
    / \\
   /\  \|
   | \  '--._//___
   |  \______  ==    
   |____|    `-- 
   |____|
  /     | 
  \      >
   \    |
    \   |
     |  |
     |  |
     |  |
     |__|
    /    \__
    |_______)
  
Here's one of the "bad"  guys.


- 
      ___________       THE       ___________
     / _________ \  <\PRINCE />  / _________ \
    / /   __    \/   \\     //   \/    __   \ \
   / /   /  \         \\   //         /  \   \ \
  / /   / /\/        /""""""\         \/\ \   \ \
  \ \  / /  SEE HIS (  /   \ \  SEE HIS  \ \  / /
   \ \ \ \   FACE    \/<> <>\/   SMILE   / / / /
    \ \ \ \          /   W   \          / / / /
    / /  \ \        /\_|||||_/\        / /  \ \
   / /   /  \      //   |||   \\      /  \   \ \
  / /   / /\ \    //     '     \\    / /\ \   \ \
 / /   / / / /   </ TIME TO DIE \>   \ \ \ \   \ \
/ /   /  \/  \_______________________/  \/  \   \ \
\ \  / /\_________________________________/\ \  / /
 \ \/ /    kro...@inspace.net     \ \/ /
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    Gory javascript animations for your enjoyment

Praseodymium 59 escreveu na mensagem <6jakqu$gb...@brown.telepac.pt>...
|This is just a small text I had to write for school. C&C greatly
|appreciated...
|
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|- To Forgive -


I'm so sorry, I posted this on the wrong newsgroup!! :-(
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________________________P r a s e o d y m i u m  5 9
praseodymium59#geocities.com         ICQ UIN 4191789
http://www.geocities.com/SoHo/5992/Praseodymium.html
'Fight, turn, love, with no pity' - Blind Zero______