Re: Evolution -- how to improve it?

Alex Schroeder wrote:
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Howdy.  I like the concept of the art, but the first two are too big, I
think.  The worm/snake looks like a sea monster, and the four-legged
animal is really confusing.

I realize part of the idea is that the creatures all have the same head
(%0), but, to my mind, it looks better like this:

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Well, maybe not.  Now the second creature looks like a horse.  Hmm.

                     
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maybe?  I'm trying to go for the "lower mammal" look.

Ehh.  It was worth a shot.

Annnna
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