LINE: MY FIRST MED ART

Hi. I have been trying to draw something unique for my forum.
These are my tries.Problem is, people complaining that it takes
up two screens, and can't I do it in one screen. Well, I tried,
the results of that are the second posting  here. What do you
all think of this, first of all, and can anyone improve on this,
make it smaller, etc? Any help would be very much appreciated!
Thank you!



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OK, now my one screen attempt:

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Problem here, is just doesn't look as good as the first one.
I Need something like this only a little better looking than what I
can do, so I figured with all the artists here, someone may be
able to come up with something to help me.

I did all the artwork myself.  This is my first real attempt.
I did a vase with flowers once, but dunno if anyone would like that,
here it is, just in case:

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I know it looks kind of amateurish, but I am new at drawing this
stuff. I love it and really enjoy the art posted here. Anyway, if
anyone can help me with my forum's banner, sure would appreciate it.
Has to be 20 lines or less :(
Sue..

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Gotta run, the cat's caught in the printer.

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