Drawing of a computer ... comments?

A drawing, and as I'm pretty new in this, I'd like some comments. ..

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  s 88 ooooooooooooooo 88     s 888888888888888888888888888888888888888
  S 88 888888888888888 88    SS 888888888888888888888888888888888888888
 SS 88 888888888888888 88   SSS 8888                         - --+ 8888
 SS 88 ooooooooooooooo 88  sSSS 8888           o8888888o         | 8888
sSS 88 888888888888888 88 SSSSS 8888         o88888888888o         8888
SSS 88 888888888888888 88 SSSSS 8888        8888 88888 8888      | 8888
SSS 88 ooooooooooooooo 88 SSSSS 8888       o888   888   888o       8888
SSS 88 888888888888888 88 SSSSS 8888       8888   888   8888       8888
SSS 88 888888888888888 88 SSSSS 8888       8888   888   8888       8888
SSS 88 oooooooooo      88 SSSSS 8888       8888o o888o o8888       8888
SSS 88 8888888888 .::. 88 SSSSS 8888       988 8o88888o8 88P       8888
SSS 88 oooooooooo :::: 88 SSSSS 8888        8oo 9888889 oo8        8888
SSS 88 8888888888  `'  88 SSSSS 8888         988o     o88P         8888
SSS 88ooooooooooooooooo88  SSSS 8888           98888888P           8888
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SSS 888888888888888888888  \\   __SS 88+-8+-88============8-8==88 S
SSS 888888888888888888888-. \\  \  S 8888888888888888888888888888
SSS 888888888888888888888  \\\  \\       `.__________.'      ` .
SSS 88O8O8O8O8O8O8O8O8O88  \\.   \\______________________________`_.
SSS 88 el cheapo 8O8O8O88 \\  '.  \|________________________________|
 SS 88O8O8O8O8o8O8O8O8O88  \\   '-.___
  S 888888888888888888888 /~          ~~~~~-----~~~~---.__
 .---------------------------------------------------.    ~--.
 \ \______\ __________________________________________\-------^.-----------.
 :\'  _   _ _ _ _  _ _ _ _  _ _ _ _   _ _ _           `\        \
 ::\ ,\_\,\_\_\_\_\\_\_\_\_\\_\_\_\_\,\_\_\_\           \      o '8o 8o .
 |::\  -_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-___  -_-_-_   _ _ _ _  \      8o 88 88 \
 |_::\ ,\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\___\,\_\_\_\,\_\_\_\_\ \      88       \
    `:\ ,\__\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\  \,\_\_\_\,\_\_\_\ \ \      88       .
     `:\ ,\__\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\____\    _   ,\_\_\_\_\ \      88o    .|
       :\ ,\____\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\____\  ,\_\ _,\_\_\_\ \ \      'ooooo'
        :\ ,\__\\__\_______________\__\\__\,\_\_\_\,\___\_\_\ \
         `\  --  -- --------------- --  --   - - -   --- - -   )____________
           `--------------------------------------------------'

Little details there:

- those O's around the original name of my machine are ventilation holes
  (cool name, @elcheapo, you may use it if you want to, I didn't =)

- above it are led's behind dark mask, and the reset is to the right.
  And the big round one is the complementer of the master-I/O-bit.

- monitor is old Forefront, some may recognize it

- keyboard was -ugh- so hard, and now it looks like Commodore 4+'s one
  (if somebody still remembers that machine =)

- no, the mouse isn't PS/2's old clumsy one, in fact it's three-button
  one. I just banged my head to the 76-chars-limit of my editor and got tired.

- and no, the picture in the monitor isn't a reflected image of me ...


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In article <4lls43$gg...@hiekkalaatikko.cs.hut.fi>,
Tomi Sarvela <ora...@nether.tky.hut.fi> wrote:
>A drawing, and as I'm pretty new in this, I'd like some comments. ..

[drawing snipped - bandwidth is a terrible thing to waste]

>- keyboard was -ugh- so hard, and now it looks like Commodore 4+'s one
>  (if somebody still remembers that machine =)

Are you kidding?  I used to own one of those cheap things.  Fitting that 
the computer you drew should be named El-Cheapo and have a C= +4's 
keyboard.  Mine worked for exactly 2 months before it up and died on us, 
and the store gave us a shiney new C= 128 in it's stead.

>- and no, the picture in the monitor isn't a reflected image of me ...

Actually, it reminds me of the smiley face from the computer image in the 
old Print Shop program.. the one I ran on my C= 128 :)

All in all a very good drawing though, I was impressed at this from 
someone who claims this to be his first attempt.  You've a lot of 
potential :)
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