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Original Usenet message from alt.ascii-art, 17 Jan 2003.
Re: Train depot

Re: Train depot

lgbeard <lgb...@bullreguard.nut> wrote:
> [Train depot]
> 
> The structure look fine. The representation of the tracks are poor.
> It resembles a earthen bank better than a set of rail road tracks.
> Any ideas ?

I think the perspective is broken.
                        __________________
vanishing  --.       ,-'|                |
  point      |    ,-'   |                |
             V    |     |                |
             +    |     |                |
      y           |     |                |
    z |           `-.   |                |
     \|___x          `-.|________________|

This is the perspective of the building. The X and Y axes are in the
plane of the picture, and Z is towards the vanishing point.

The track should be in the XZ plane. Assuming the track is intended to run
parallel to the building, the sleepers should lie along the X axis, and the
rails should converge towards the vanishing point:

                        __________________
                     ,-'|                |
                  ,-'   |                |
                  |     |                |
             +    |     |                |
      y           |     |                |
    z |      |=\  '-.   |                |
     \|___x  |==\    `-.|________________|

Instead, the sleepers lie in the XY plane, and the rails don't converge. This
makes it look like the track is on a slope.
                        __________________
                     ,-'|                |
                  ,-'   |                |
                  |     |                |
             +    |     |                |
      y           |     |                |
    z |   `-.,'`-.'-.   |                |
     \|___x  `-.,'`-.`-.|________________|


On the other hand, if the track isn't intended to be parallel to the building,
you still need to fix it a bit. Either the rails, the sleepers, or both should
converge.

I won't try and diddle your picture because our styles are quite different,
but I hope this helps.

-- 
Harry Mason ("hjm200.ecs@soton@ac@uk" =~ tr/@./.@/)

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