Re: Feedback wanted:novice

Michael Hamm wrote:
> Veronica Karlsson <dre...@on.spammer> wrote, in part:
> >Michael Hamm wrote:
> > > Hi. This is the first picture I've ever made, and I'd like some 
> > > feedback: how it can be improved, what I did wrong, what if 
> > > anything I did right, etc. Thanks. In case you can't tell, by the > > > way, it's supposed to be a numeral 2. And, yes, I nkow it's 
> > > lopsided, but I  couldn't figure out how to remedy that. It was 
> > > made in Notepad (that comes with Win95).
> > >
> > >   .88.
> > > d8'  '8b
> > > `      8b
> > >        8P
> > >      .8P
> > >     .8P
> > >    .8P
> > >    88MSH98
> >
> > Hmmm... sounds like a case for Figlet...


It's no longer lopsided, a little more solid, what do you think:

 ,d88b.
d8'  '8b
`      8b
      ,8'
    .d8'
  .d8'
.d8'
8888MSH98


 
> Yes, I know Figlet makes numerals. But I wanted feedback on *mine* and 
> how it can be improved. Meanwhile, I made another (the second picture 
> I've ever made), thus:
> 
>   .888.
> d8'   '8b
> `      8b
>      .8P
>    .8P'
>   .8P'
>  .88MSH98
> 
> Somewhat better, don't you think? Feedback, please. E-mail {msh21 at 
> is7 dot nyu dot edu). Thanks.


How about:

 ,d888b.
d8'   `8b
`'    ,8P
    .8P
  .8P'
 .8P'
.888MSH98

Ive made the top curve a little more solid, I've shifted the bottom line
one left and made it one longer, so it isn't lopsided anymore.

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