Feedback on Ascii Essay needed...

A week or so ago, Michael Hamm wrote a great essay on Ascii Art. He
would desperately like some feed back on it. It is now visible for all
to read here:

http://pages.nyu.edu/~msh210/essay.html


Michael Hamm wrote:
> 
> Hi, Donovan!
> 
> I published my essay (on ASCII) on the World-Wide Web, and got no
> feedback. Zero! Is it good? -- bad? Which parts need improvement? What
> topics are discussed in too much detail? -- what in not enough? What
> opinions did you agree with? -- disagree with? Are there any falsities or
> opinions displayed as facts? ("Displayed" is the wrong word, but you get
> the idea.)
> 
> Would appreciate feedback. Thanks.
> 
> Michael Hamm
> BA, Math, NYU, '00
> msh...@nyu.edu
> http://pages.nyu.edu/~msh210/


So if you have read it or are going to, please take a moment to respond
to his hard work with some comments, good &/or bad.
-- 
Peace,

Donovan


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