Re: Nerd Boy, Episode 262
"Joaquim G�ndara" <cla...@lords.com> wrote in news:aiuurn$172q7b$1@ID-
102694.news.dfncis.de:
<snip #262>
Well, I'm gonna try out this "constructive criticism" stuff...
First off, I liked the strip (I was laughing out loud at the
second frame :). I'm going to have to agree with llizard on
the last frame, though. Could've done without the exclamation
from NB.
And maybe it's just me, but I don't seem to read the strips
-entirely- in order. In this one, the last frame was very busy.
After the third frame, my eyes were drawn to NB's statement
before I saw the robot crashing into the hovercraft (which is a
terrible waste of a hovercraft, btw!). If -I- were to arrange
the strip, it'd look more like this:
--
So you're saying the Exactly! Quick,
hologram that took Mandy to the hovercraft!
is somewhere in space? ` ,,, ,
'.. \OO
.||. ||.
___ || _____ dd _____
Huh. Why not call it the Give it a rest.
"Nerdmobile" while ` ,,, ,
you're at it? '.. OO
|| ((
___________ |\ _____ b b ____
There she is, interstellar
.-------. ______ hyperdrive raring to go.
/ )__/_____( , ,,,
/_|\______/ _____| OO ..'
(____________///////( .||. .||.
______ _|_ ```````` ___ dd ___ || ______
\ ` /
- *CRASH!* -
`. -. || ,- *fzzzt* AND WE'RE OFF
__ '. [] .- ______ TO A GREAT START!
'-. `. ==~ -__/_____( , ,,,
--- _ *meep* \ _____| @@ oo'
.-'_ _ |`\///////( -||- .//.
_________ _(_ | ```````` ___ dd ___ // __________jg
----
The only things I changed were this:
- Frame three was moved a bit left
- Frame four was moved a bit right, and one line down (for spacing)
- 'jg' was moved to the end, but that's unrelated
The effect I saw was the camera panning left with Fan Boy standing
still. This layout makes the frames a bit more consistant.
'Nerdmobile'... heh... :)
-Phydeaux
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