line: first attempt at ascii

OK... Here it is!!! My very first attempt at ascii art based on a doodle 
I drew in a class last year. I would love to get opinions on this...







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          'Tb\__,/$$$$$$WWW$$$$\,WW,/$$$$WWW$$$$$$     Love
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           \\/d$$$d8P"      "Y8b,T,d8P"      "Y8b$$$$  Falling apart
            |B$$$dP'           "8a8"           `Yd$$/ Nothing I can do
-*s3$$$$$$$$$$$$$8(              "              )8$$| A total eclipse
            |B$$$I8                             8I$$/  Of the heart
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            /dP' '\$$"8a,                 ,a8"$$$\    Once upon a time
           ,P'      \$"Yba             adP"$$$$\Y$b\  There was light
          /         /'d$`Y8a         a8P'$$$$/   'Y$L  In my life
                  ,BP'\$$$`88,     ,88'$$$$\       'Y Now there's only
                 ,BP'   Y$$$"8b   d8"$$$$$,$L       '  Love in the dark
                ,BP'      Y$$"8b d8"$$$$'  '$L        Nothing I can say
               ,BP'       /|d$`888'$$|\     '$L       A total eclipse
              ,BP'      /dP  '$$"$$'/|$L     '$L       Of the heart
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                       A Cat's Wisdom:
      |\      _,,,---,,_         Make friends with your food!
ZZzz  /,`.-'`'    -.  ;-;;,_     Look cute when you misbehave!
     |,4-  ) )-,_..;\ (  `'-'    If you like it, lie on it!
    '---''(_/--'  `-'\_)                    ha...@kepler.unh.edu
                                            http://pubpages.unh.edu/~hat

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