Re: Advice Please

In article <ant...@cae-coed.zetnet.co.uk>, Elaine Jones
<ela...@cae-coed.zetnet.co.uk> wrote:
[snip]
> Advice on sorting out my attempt at a Ddraig Goch (Welsh
> Dragon) would be much appreciated.
> 
> There is a picture on my site
> 
> http://www.users.zetnet.co.uk/ejones
> 
> The position of the tongue, rampant front claw and the over-
> hand loop to the tail are essential.
> 
> This is my first attempt
> 
>                              ___, ____--'
>                         _,-.'_,-'      (
>                      ,-' _.-''....____(
>            ,))_     /  ,'\ `'-.     (          /\
>    __ ,+..a`  \(_   ) /   \    `'-..(         /  \
>    )`-;...,_   \(_ ) /     \  ('''    ;'^^`\ <./\.>
>        ,_   )   |( )/   ,./^``_..._  < /^^\ \_.))
>       `=;; (    (/_')-- -'^^`      ^^-.`_.-` >-'
>       `=\\ (                             _,./
>         ,\`(                         )^^^
>           ``;         __-'^^\       /
>             / _>emj^^^   `\..`-.    ``'.
>            / /               / /``'`; /
>           / /          ,-=='-`=-'  / /
>     ,-=='-`=-.               ,-=='-`=-.
>   *******************************************
> 
> Thanks
> 
> Elaine J

Elaine, your dragon is great. I looked at the picture on your site and
made these small adjustments that you may or may not agree with. (I
shortened the body and head a little and moved the rampant leg one line
down. The eye is changed as well but I can't figure out either how to
give it the same wonderful expression as on the regular drawing.)
 
                             ___,____--'
                        _,-.'_,-'     (
                     ,-'_.-''....____(       
           ,))_     /  ,\ `'-.     (          /\
   --, ,+.-&  \(_   ) /  \    `'-..(         /  \
   )/`-;..,_   \(_ ) /    \  ('''    ;'^^`\ <./\.>
            )   |( )/  ,./^``_..._  < /^^\ \_.))
      `.;, (    (/_')- -'^^`      ^^-.`_.-) )-'
        )} (                            _,./
      `=, \(                        )^^^
         \ `;         _-'^^\       /
         )/`/ _>emj^^^  `\..`-.    ``'.
           / /              / /``'`; /
          / /         ,-=='-`=-'  / /
    ,-=='-`=-.              ,-=='-`=-. 
  *******************************************


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